IELTS GT Writing Task 1 Sample Answers Band 7
Write a letter to the newspaper editor about the poor condition of the historic building in your area. In your letter write : What building are you writing about Describe the current condition of the building What should be done in this situation
7 bands Sample ANSWERS:
I am writing to bring your attention towards one of the serious problem that needs immediate attention.
I reside in Amritsar city which is a major tourist attraction due to many historical places the prominent one is Jallianwala Bagh which is located in the vicinity of the Golden Temple. My concern is towards the poor condition of Jallianwala bagh which is related to 1919 massacre and is deeply attached with the patriotic emotions of the Indian people.
But now the infrastructure of the building of Jallianwala Bagh is losing its significance as many visitors who come here are disrespecting the place by carving on the walls and writing their names for no reason. In addition to this, it can be clearly seen that the building has not underwent any renovation for so long that gives an unpleasant experience to its goers.
In this regard, I would like you to write an article alongside suggesting some solutions to make it worth visiting such as installing the CCTV cameras for proper surveillance to curb vandalism in any form. Another suggestion is refurbishment of site should take place making it technologically advanced as well as historical artefacts must be cleaned and preserved properly which would eventually attract more visitors.
Hope you will consider upon my request.